14/31 of March challenge
July 3rd
2014, 10:30pm
Asthma attacks. People
unable to breathe, gasping, gasping for air, but they have no choice but to
carry on, for at the top were the busses, the warm busses. That would take them
back to camp, back to their beds, back to the warmth. Back to some sort of safety.
July 3rd
2014, 10:45pm
Halfway there. Now it
was colder. It wasn’t snowing cold. It was the icy cold, the cold that chills
you all the way to the bone. The cold you feel when you’re upset. The cold so
cold, the only way to get warm was to imagine you were. The cold so cold that
no amount of layers could warm you up. The cold so cold they could hardly move,
and could hardly breathe. The cold of fear.
The fear of looking in any direction and only seeing darkness. The moon
wasn’t out, the rain, snow, and hail clouds covered the stars. There was nothing
except cold darkness. Darkness and cold.
July 3rd
2014, 11:15pm
Almost there. Almost to
the buses that would take them back to camp. They could see them. They could
see the counsellors who had already made it to the top waving their
flashlights. The campers began to run. Running. Freezing. Excited. Blood
rushing hearts pumping. Hope regained. Spirts higher than they had been in hours.
I think that asthma attacks are sort of freaky. I like how you made different times at night and explains what happeneds at each time.
ReplyDeleteI've enjoyed all of these slices of this time, Quinn. Love "The cold so cold, the only way to get warm was to imagine you were."
ReplyDeleteCREEPY!!!
ReplyDeleteGood slice. Didn't you do this for your short story for Adam?
ReplyDeleteI liked all of the description you included in your slice of life.
ReplyDelete